If You Need Help–Ask for It

So I heard back from the editor in Tennessee and I’m so excited! She didn’t have terrible things to say about my writing overall–not too much passive voice or telling rather than showing. Basically, she thinks the problem is that my story moves too slowly. And I see what she means.

I need to amp up the action (no car chases, maybe less wandering about the farm thinking and setting the scene). And I need to get a little more of my own passion into my words. This is BIG STUFF I’m writing about, the characters need to take things a little less in stride, maybe.

So, I’m going to go over the notes several times, hash out some new directions and edit, edit, edit. Then I’ll work up the nerve to pull publishing house editor #3 out of my back pocket and try again. Pray that I don’t get in a hurry or jump the gun.

Check out Jamie Chavez if you need some professional writing help–her link is on the right side of the page. A charming and kind lady with great tact and more than a little insight into the Christian publishing business.

3 thoughts on “If You Need Help–Ask for It

  1. Mom

    When I read it, I thought the start was slow, but lost that sense once I got into it. I still liked it better than either of those last 2 books you sent me and they got published. You just have to make the “right connection” at the “right time.”

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